Hi Ming, 

The figure looks great and represents the principles perfectly. Thank you so much for this and for the detailed comments!!

I agree with many of them (also with John's response) and provided my own comments. Based on your comment of principle 5 and 7 and edited a bit your figure but I am not sure it still applies (please take a look at it here: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1NWFCYmv_nJNYnhhJ1CPQSh1ZkIpIHUOquWd_isBQ4KI/edit#slide=id.g267f9462ee0_0_0).

I did not accept any changes to the document (except the obvious ones). 
I'll wait until next meeting to accept changes and clean the document so please if provide your feedback by then.


All the best!

Yani

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Lead Data Team
Yale University
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Subject: Re: [tdwg-humboldt] [Hierarchical Events doc] Example for implementation principles added | Proofread of 3.2.3 Principle of inference needed
 
Hi Ming,

I looked at your Figure slide and it seems fine to me.  Nice job. I also looked at section 3.2.3 in the Event Hierarchy document and left suggested edits and a response to your comment on the last paragraph.

Cheers,

John

On Sat, Aug 12, 2023 at 8:12 AM Yi Ming Gan <ymgan@naturalsciences.be> wrote:
Hi all,


Apology for sending email in the weekend.
  1. I have added a figure to illustrate the implementation principles in 4 Examples (non-normative) in the Hierarchical Events document. Figure is slide 21 here. Please modify if necessary. @John, can you please check if I have the examples right?

  2. Can someone please proofread 3.2.3 Principle of inference again? 
    1. When I was reading it, I feel like Occurrence is described as child Event, but I am not sure if it is just me.
    2. I commented on a paragraph which I feel unsure about and would like to suggest to move that part to User Guide instead. Please correct me if I am wrong.

It will be public holiday for me on Monday and Tuesday and I have another meeting at the same time as Humboldt's on Wednesday, so I would not be able to join the Humboldt meeting. Thanks a lot for all the hard work!!


Cheers
Ming

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