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The figure looks great and represents the principles perfectly. Thank you so much for this and for the detailed comments!!</div>
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I agree with many of them (also with John's response) and provided my own comments. Based on your comment of principle 5 and 7 and edited a bit your figure but I am not sure it still applies (please take a look at it here:
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I did not accept any changes to the document (except the obvious ones). </div>
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<div>I looked at your Figure slide and it seems fine to me. Nice job. I also looked at section 3.2.3 in the Event Hierarchy document and left suggested edits and a response to your comment on the last paragraph.</div>
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Hierarchical Events document</a>. Figure is slide 21 <a href="https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1NWFCYmv_nJNYnhhJ1CPQSh1ZkIpIHUOquWd_isBQ4KI/edit?usp=sharing" originalsrc="https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1NWFCYmv_nJNYnhhJ1CPQSh1ZkIpIHUOquWd_isBQ4KI/edit?usp=sharing" shash="WNkRUHzrgMcfm6xSazJ9YSpSvUPNidGgFp97ilBA0O/GnTATGuGVXjzqxg9psuHBf42RFIwz2+20ONlAE2zysc1VaGLbckFm3UnbwIrWYsQXaUPd0KU5ZCKISWlWHXTjCrlGEesCZ1IoCydzJ62Al8+kDU+g3lhre6JyJwAqMDg=" title="https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1NWFCYmv_nJNYnhhJ1CPQSh1ZkIpIHUOquWd_isBQ4KI/edit?usp=sharing" id="x_m_-1969993707389547788LPNoLPOWALinkPreview" target="_blank">
here</a>. Please modify if necessary. @John, can you please check if I have the examples right?<br>
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<li><span>When I was reading it, I feel like Occurrence is described as child Event, but I am not sure if it is just me.</span></li><li><span>I <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1r_XMEgB7p7OI7a5Ouq6G9oa7LmQFPcFhZZCLD9gWOIE/edit?disco=AAAA3s1bUxQ" originalsrc="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1r_XMEgB7p7OI7a5Ouq6G9oa7LmQFPcFhZZCLD9gWOIE/edit?disco=AAAA3s1bUxQ" shash="kfjg2oVNQhnzQl4rJ70yNj3heANmDKj3/oFyN4vE1P8YjlcRoUEsM6Tf3CJljJn2/OmN5TKN0Qoauf35W0AHt9ztgNaFIvn9UCiakgNLATNVkFLO7OY0n+0MQkjR/8ZdWFpUuqnBNvDL74Annk67CuhNkdscyXk+2vKuF3WTI9Y=" title="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1r_XMEgB7p7OI7a5Ouq6G9oa7LmQFPcFhZZCLD9gWOIE/edit?disco=AAAA3s1bUxQ" id="x_m_-1969993707389547788LPNoLPOWALinkPreview_4" target="_blank">
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<div>It will be public holiday for me on Monday and Tuesday and I have another meeting at the same time as Humboldt's on Wednesday, so I would not be able to join the Humboldt meeting. Thanks a lot for all the hard work!!</div>
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